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RJ Sykes's avatar

Short and very descriptive! Impressive work.

Tina Crossgrove's avatar

โ€œCall me Succubus.โ€

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A Writerโ€™s Voice's avatar

This is beautiful. Yes. Horror. But you describe it in a way that makes it beautiful. Amazing imagery. I would love to see this concept expanded upon.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

That means more than you think. I love Clive Barker because of his ability to make the grotesque sound somehow lovely, so itโ€™s something I always strive for in my own work.

A Writerโ€™s Voice's avatar

Oh, my god, yes! That is what this reminded me of. The beauty of a Clive Barker story. You are very talented, man. Iโ€™m a fan.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

You are way too kind. Cheers.

A Writerโ€™s Voice's avatar

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Kimberly B๐ŸŒด๐Ÿ‘ป๐ŸŒด's avatar

Omg that first one needs to be a film!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

The image is so cool. That one was an easy write.

Kimberly B๐ŸŒด๐Ÿ‘ป๐ŸŒด's avatar

It truly was, and you matched the vibe perfectly!

Sue's avatar

Okay, those were amazing! Short, to the point and definitely creepy.