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Jason Garman's avatar

Man, this was wild in the best way. The slow build from office-itch to full-on body horror was chef’s kiss.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I appreciate that. Thank you!!

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RC Stacey's avatar

Gruesomely good! Thank you!

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Thank you for reading.

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Bonnie-Author and Artist's avatar

I already hated spiders, but now I really hate them! This is gruesome, but good stuff. There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that, good job.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Yeah. These are not professionally edited and basically done to the best of my ability. Thank you for reading.

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Bonnie-Author and Artist's avatar

My 20 chapter novella is not professionally edited either. I use the ProWritingAid app, which helps a lot, but I still have 10 more chapters to edit. Not the fun part, ugh.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

It's awful. I wish I could afford to have these professionally done, but it's just not in the cards at the moment. Slowly trying to rebuild my author career and have to be careful about where my money is spent.

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Norm DePlume's avatar

Great story. This is why I won't keep a spider for a pet, ungrateful wretches.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

LOL. They are rather nasty little beasts. Thank you fir reading it.

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