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I liked the last two, especially "Ash". There’s something strangely melancholic about its ending, as if the last secret of the old house disappears along with the body. "Dust" is more straightforward, but I liked the progression from something almost beautiful in the light to something suffocating and deadly.

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Fine, I'll go dust my office.

I love the imagery in these. Looking forward to reading more.

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