I am going to serialize it as soon as I get done posting Salem. I had a good idea for it, then started spinning off on a tangent and got lost along the way with this one. I pulled it together in the end, but it felt messy to me.
Thank you. I always try to write in a way that is akin to how I would tell you a story if I was talking to you. I tend to skip the beautiful prose, which I can’t do well anyway, and get right to the meat of the story. I think that’s why novellas are my sweet spot.
oooo this is a very interesting piece. I'd love to read more. I enjoyed how she takes a strong leadership role, the foreshadowing of the bartender crossing herself, the "bloody" donut, the beginning scene with her assistant it all was so very gripping. I'd love to read the book may I ask?
Why don't you like this story, Mr. Watson?? It's really good! I'm fascinated by Erzsebet - would love to read this serial!!
I am going to serialize it as soon as I get done posting Salem. I had a good idea for it, then started spinning off on a tangent and got lost along the way with this one. I pulled it together in the end, but it felt messy to me.
The first chapter is great! Your writing really engages the reader - very accessible.
Thank you. I always try to write in a way that is akin to how I would tell you a story if I was talking to you. I tend to skip the beautiful prose, which I can’t do well anyway, and get right to the meat of the story. I think that’s why novellas are my sweet spot.
They are definitely your forte!! You’ve got a fan for life here.
You are too kind. Thank you.
oooo this is a very interesting piece. I'd love to read more. I enjoyed how she takes a strong leadership role, the foreshadowing of the bartender crossing herself, the "bloody" donut, the beginning scene with her assistant it all was so very gripping. I'd love to read the book may I ask?
I am going to serialize this one as soon as I get done with Salem.
I can't wait!
very intriguing so far, I like the concept
I'd be interested in reading more.
I'm intrigued... But I feel like when you tell someone you love their new hairstyle, and they actually hate it and didn't want a compliment. 😶🌫️
It’s weird. As much as I hated this book, it was the one that some of my regular readers seemed to enjoy the most.