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Monica A Leyva's avatar

I love the sinister ingenuity of turning a lighthouse, traditionally a symbol of safety, into the very means of luring sailors toward their doom. The detail of her consuming the keeper’s final breath before exhaling the fog is particularly unsettling. Beautifully atmospheric and wickedly imaginative!

Time Is A Ghost's avatar

I absolutely loved this. There’s something so special about flash fiction that can leave such a lasting impression in so few words. You drew me in completely, and I’m still thinking about it. Beautifully done! 🖤

Blake Dalton's avatar

You should get LM to make a suno song with your lyrics, this is great!