My mom and dad were "caught" dancing alone in an empty ballroom a couple of years ago. This story made me think of them. So vivid and bittersweet. I love it when you sneak up and tug at our emotions.
This was such a beautiful read! It was bittersweet reading of their final moments together of him listening to her singing got me pulling on the heart strings 🥹
I imagine my husband and I may be like this. I remember seeing him in the audience at my senior recital, can pick out in my memory which seat he was in in the recital hall.
Loved it. Reminds me of one of those dystopian movies where the world has gone to shit but people still come together to enjoy the last dregs of humanity...
My mom and dad were "caught" dancing alone in an empty ballroom a couple of years ago. This story made me think of them. So vivid and bittersweet. I love it when you sneak up and tug at our emotions.
That’s a lovely image.
This was such a beautiful read! It was bittersweet reading of their final moments together of him listening to her singing got me pulling on the heart strings 🥹
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Beautiful and so sweet. I love her prompts.
They are always great
dark, and sweet. Hopefully, this is what death is...dancing for all eternity with the one who loved you most. Thanks for this...
That would be lovely.
just as long as its not break dancing…
I imagine my husband and I may be like this. I remember seeing him in the audience at my senior recital, can pick out in my memory which seat he was in in the recital hall.
Damn, man. I thought you were gonna scare me, not tug at my heart strings.
Every now and again, I turn into a big softy.
Loved it. Reminds me of one of those dystopian movies where the world has gone to shit but people still come together to enjoy the last dregs of humanity...
That’s a lovely way to think about it.
Love that one!
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Beautiful.
Thank you
Just beautiful
Thank you
Please, adorn-adore me
Within this silent night
Dance with me, so specially
This night
Might
Add up
To a fleeting, fragile bliss…
At last.
This was unexpectedly sweet.
So lovely! I really like all your flash fictions! They are just on point! 🥰
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One of the most haunting and melancholic stories I've read of yours. Just lovely. 🥀🥀
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Touching, very nice.
A great response to the prompt and a wonderful piece.
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