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Elizabeth Van Alstine's avatar

Wow amazing writing!!!

The Anonymous Author's avatar

Brilliant writing. Thank you, John.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Those red threads searching for a body to inhabit... those were so nasty and sad in the best way that I just kind of winced and kept going. 😣

Bon C's avatar

Intense, dark and beautifully written

Scott MacDonald's avatar

Brutal and dark, but with lovely, occasionally lyrical prose. Like black coffee laced with antifreeze.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Love that description. Thank you

DW Davis's avatar

You nailed the "dark" part.

Nicholas Samuel Stember's avatar

Well, you got the “dark” down perfectly :)

A Fresh Mindset's avatar

John, another fantastic story. You certainly have a way of keeping me on the edge of my seat with the graphic detail you are able to put to paper.

Michael Olson's avatar

Thanks for keeping this story honest. I once wrote a script about a pregnant drug user with a few layers that investors and casting agents didn’t want to touch. The story still haunts me. So thanks again for keeping this truth alive.