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Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

This reminds me of the Doomsday Clock if some higher power took control of it. Even typing that after reading your story is unsettling because....what if. I especially loved the siren. Haunting imagery!

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Neural Foundry's avatar

This is absolutely haunting work. The iterative species testing idea reminds me of those late night thoughts about whether we're actualy living in some cosmic petri dish. What really gets me is the Council's patience tho, watching twenty failed attempts suggests theyve got time scales we cant even grasp, which makes the whole thing feel even more futile for us. The quiet acceptance phase before the end felt painfully plausible.

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