15 Comments
User's avatar
İsmail's avatar

John, the descent from decadent elite depravity into raw supernatural horror is brilliantly done

The detail of them mashing food through the holes in their latex masks immediately creates such a visceral, repulsive atmosphere. And just when the ATF raid seems like it will deliver a familiar kind of justice, the shootout shifts into a supernatural resurrection, ending on that chilling snort. What a killer cliffhanger.

Fantastic pacing for flash fiction. The tension builds beautifully, and the imagery is unforgettable 🩸🐗

Eliza Davey's avatar

Wow! Great visuals here and intense! Reminds me of Mila’s poem, Eat the Rich (@theinbetween)

Lee Mannell's avatar

Love me a scary pig story!

Lightning Struck Twice's avatar

This could be a megadeth song.

Lightning Struck Twice's avatar

Heck yes 🤘🏾

Alicia's avatar

Probably the truth.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I would not doubt it. Bohemian Grove being a prime example.

Alicia's avatar

💯💯💯

Bon C's avatar

Very cool

Joshua Bader's avatar

Fantastic. Thanks for using the image. I particularly enjoy the twist at the end.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Thank you. Great image.