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Night Cracks's avatar

It's the cozy places and family cooking that makes you feel safe, isn't it?

Lovecraftian vibe hit exactly when and where it should.

Well written, John!

Harriet Loveluck's avatar

Ah! That chanting chorus, super creepy! Love your dynamic image too, it really was scroll stopping!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Good to know. Thank you.

Andrea 🌄's avatar

Awesome twist! The pacing is great and left me wanting more!

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

That was a cool surprise ending

Erin Pyper, MSW's avatar

The ending gave me chills done my spine.

Erin Pyper, MSW's avatar

Of course! Your piece accomplished that goal for me

Deborah Dobbs's avatar

Yet another twist I did not predict!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

That’s always a relief.