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theinkspilled's avatar

I loved it, nothing beats a good eerie, haunted witch story. Amazing piece!

Zeitforge's avatar

And now the witch is moving. . .not scary at all. . . shivers

James Jensen's avatar

I think I met that witch down by a swamp just east of Pensacola.

Bon C's avatar

Awesome

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

This is excellent

Tony McNichol's avatar

Ummm....yes, Kelly; there ARE such things as wiches! I am a sucker for a swamp witch...great descriptive work, and a creepy read! Thanks!

Psychic Medium, Donna Frasca's avatar

I have family in Georgia and yes, it is unbearable at times, oh wait are we talking about the heat or family? 😂

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

LOL. My pasty Scottish skin finds it very tough going in GA summertime

Psychic Medium, Donna Frasca's avatar

And my delicate fair Lithuanian skin also finds the heat unbearable. I’m actually going to Georgia to Savannah in a few days, but luckily the heat has not kicked in yet.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I love Savannah. Such a creepy cool spot.

Psychic Medium, Donna Frasca's avatar

I’m spending five days in Savannah and I freaking can’t wait! I will be taking notes on what I sense and see!

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I listen to horror narrations at night to fall asleep, so I was immediately creeped out imagining this play out. I don't know if I'd have the guts to record such a story on site, and definitely won't after reading this! I also felt a bit sorry for the witch at the end!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Yeah, she is not the villain of the piece.

Monica A Leyva's avatar

I won't lie my heart was racing a little bit as I read this. I loved it.

Miles Carnegie's avatar

This is sweaty in the best way. I felt gross immediately, which is a compliment.

Also love the modern hook, a creator hunting “authentic” ambience.

A Writer’s Voice's avatar

I love this so much! I was looking forward to it and it didn’t disappoint.

Histories & Hauntings's avatar

Creepy...

Darker Ink's avatar

Good morning, good story 🌄

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