Oh, Grandma! I was rooting for her, just sure she'd murdered a monster, but now I'm wondering what really went down. Love the ending leaving us with questions!
I don’t normally read this sort of stuff, but in the spirit of trying new things…and the flash part tempted me. Glad I did. Gave us something big right away, enjoyed the ending. Might there be more to this? Either way, thanks for inspiring me.
It made me think about how I could use the flash form to start an idea I’ve had for years. Not that the whole idea would work in flash segments, but the opening might work in this format. Cheers again!
A grandma in hell is definitely a first 👹👌 you’d expect they’re all knitting St Peter socks and scarfs.
LOL. Right?
Oh, Grandma! I was rooting for her, just sure she'd murdered a monster, but now I'm wondering what really went down. Love the ending leaving us with questions!
Thank you
That was great dude!
All what the horror should be about - building tension and fear of the unknown for 99% of the story and then BOOOOOM. I'M IN HELL!
Thank you.
Really enjoyed this one. Tight, unsettling, and the reveal lands just horribly right. Great bit of flash horror done with a steady hand
Appreciate it. Cheers.
So creepy and to the point!! Being a grandma myself!! Loved it!
Thank you!!
I always enjoy open endings…nice work!
I usually don't, but I bend the rules with my flash stuff, as they sometimes get expanded into bigger ideas. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Wow! This was great!
Thank you!!
I don’t normally read this sort of stuff, but in the spirit of trying new things…and the flash part tempted me. Glad I did. Gave us something big right away, enjoyed the ending. Might there be more to this? Either way, thanks for inspiring me.
Thank you. I have no plans to expand this one, but now you’ve got me thinking.
It made me think about how I could use the flash form to start an idea I’ve had for years. Not that the whole idea would work in flash segments, but the opening might work in this format. Cheers again!
That’s excellent. Hope you share it here.
I hope to do exactly that. But too much to write, never enough time.
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A couple of people have said that now. It has given me a few ideas, so we shall see.