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Kelley Tauffel - JackofThings's avatar

Just a good old fashioned slasher with naughty teenagers getting what's coming to them. Alright!

Bon C's avatar

Loved it, can’t wait for a longer piece!

Parker McCoy's avatar

Do I smell... Hehe. Creepy post, John.

Alicia's avatar

That last line... 🤣🤣

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

This was great! Perfect campy vibes for coming into warmer weather, and you have a great way with indirect characterization!

Whiskers & Wraiths's avatar

I loved it! I’ll definitely check out the full story.

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

The Grinner's origin story makes Freddy Krueger look lucky!

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I see what you did there!

Keith Evans Gore's avatar

Excellent. I do love a slasher!

Jude Klinger's avatar

Love the cover art...especially the highlight on the teeth. A great campfire legend is born.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I can’t wait to fully bring him to life. I have some horrible kills lined up.

K Sandpit - Horror Author's avatar

I love this!

Lee D. Gibbs Horror Author's avatar

Great beginning! I love the idea too.