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Deacon Short's avatar

Damn good job to work a twist into such a short story. Loved it.

Justin Zimmer's avatar

😂 well played.

Bon C's avatar

Lot of meat on the bones of this short story! Loved it.

BrainSoupFic's avatar

Fun twist:)

Deacon Short's avatar

thats a lot of drool

Jared's avatar

Hehe—😁. Get ‘em puppy thing

Wendy's avatar

Can I be his friend too?

KelleyTauffel Fiction Shroom's avatar

Such a good boy. 😈

DW Davis's avatar

It's so nice having a loyal friend to rely on.

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

He did warn them! I LOVED this!! The idea of the harbinger that also releases the "hound." Such a fun and creepy flash!

Cailin's avatar

OH MY WORD ....this was GREAT!!!!! I love it ....you went beyond my wildest imagination!!

Cailin's avatar

It's true sir and you're welcome

Cailin's avatar

It's true sir and you're welcome

James (HVR)'s avatar

"Just like all the others."