Honestly, I love that you mentioned this came from just forcing yourself to write and seeing what surfaced, because it gives the whole piece this raw dreamlike momentum that really works.
“The building is in decay, falling apart from the inside out, like a rotting tooth” is such a nasty good image. And the ending flipping the perspective into something darker than the sisters themselves was a really cool turn.
Honestly, I love that you mentioned this came from just forcing yourself to write and seeing what surfaced, because it gives the whole piece this raw dreamlike momentum that really works.
“The building is in decay, falling apart from the inside out, like a rotting tooth” is such a nasty good image. And the ending flipping the perspective into something darker than the sisters themselves was a really cool turn.
Thank you. I love free writing, as something cool tends to come out when I don’t overthink it.
Absolutely!
Thanks. I feel stronger too
Nice twist at the end. Great job, John.
Thank you
Excellent! Short and to the point.
Cheers!!
Even your stream of consciousness is good. Damn.
Thank you.
I felt the victim became the hunter. Absorbed? Perhaps like a Wraith?
I honestly don’t know what the nightmare man is. I wrote this with very little thought and went where the words took me.
It's kind of ominous. I like it.
Thank you