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Sadiah's avatar

Kept me hooked

Laura Brasher's avatar

Moral of the story......leave it where it lies!!!

Olivia Rollins, Author's avatar

I got actual chills and I could smell the leaves.

Chris Rodriguez's avatar

😳 I’m gonna be lookin around next time I go in the forest. And NOT pick up anything!!

Amanda Perkins's avatar

That creeping feeling where you think everything is just fine and peachy, then ... boom!! Excellent! I could feel my heart race by the end!

Alicia's avatar

So good.

Jose Holder's avatar

Great horror often lives and breathes in the woods. Love the story.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Appreciate it. Thank you.

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Great job, John. Love it!

Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Thank you for the entertainment.

Logan Raith's avatar

Great little story, man. That last-line turn earns every other word. Well done.