I was already enjoying the creepy little scratch and whisper thing... then the carrion breath and Feed it turned the whole room rotten in one. freaking. second..!
I liked this on so many levels. The monster that was real, the idea of it telling terrible stories, and the revenge against the asshat therapist at the end!
Creepy in a visceral way. You could feel it coming from the start of the story, you knew what was going to happen, but you had to stay with it until the end.
I was already enjoying the creepy little scratch and whisper thing... then the carrion breath and Feed it turned the whole room rotten in one. freaking. second..!
Glad you liked it.
Hell yeah eat that therapist mr closet monster
I like your stories but at my age and condition of my eyes I prefore audio stories. Have you thought of recording your stories?
I record a couple of drabbles every week. Just posted one in my notes earlier this evening
Fun!
This was so chilling!!
Thank you
The story is chilling keeps you at the edge of your seat !! Great job creating such a suspenseful and eerie atmosphere!
Thank you
Excellent
I liked this on so many levels. The monster that was real, the idea of it telling terrible stories, and the revenge against the asshat therapist at the end!
Therapy eats well ;)
Perhaps Brad should feed his therapist to the monster.
Creepy in a visceral way. You could feel it coming from the start of the story, you knew what was going to happen, but you had to stay with it until the end.