Creepy! But very well written. Lots of details, a surprisingly colorful world and a positive outlook on a new day (with old pain) coupled with the dreadful "voice" that inserts itself into the morning routine. It's captivating.
I'll happily share this on the next House of Chapters Story Highlights post!
Childhood trauma. Chaotic lives during our most vulnerable time can be truly overwhelming. Fear of troubled memories can make us horribly see reality... This is more common than we think. Exploring this misery is a great way to lead into horror. I appreciate the inspiration.
Oh, that's right, You like I, like a wee dram of whisky. Yes, I remember. I liked it when you said, "You had me at a wee dram. "Latha math agaibh air thoiseach - Slàinte"
There's something brutally honest about a protagonist whose hardest battle is just getting out of bed. The mundane cruelty of chronic pain is hard to write without melodrama, and you've kept it grounded here. Congrats!
Please don't take this the wrong way, but the team I have are people who I have known for quite some time and who I can trust with my documents. Please do keep interacting, as things might change as I get to know you better.
This is awesome, and the art is fantastic.
Thank you
Very interesting. You set up the story and the character well! I want to read more. Great kick off to his world and psyche.
Thank you
Creepy! But very well written. Lots of details, a surprisingly colorful world and a positive outlook on a new day (with old pain) coupled with the dreadful "voice" that inserts itself into the morning routine. It's captivating.
I'll happily share this on the next House of Chapters Story Highlights post!
Childhood trauma. Chaotic lives during our most vulnerable time can be truly overwhelming. Fear of troubled memories can make us horribly see reality... This is more common than we think. Exploring this misery is a great way to lead into horror. I appreciate the inspiration.
Thank you
Nate’s world is so vivid! Even ordinary moments feel tense and alive. Beautifully detailed and emotionally raw work. Thank you for writing it.
Thank you for taking the time to give it a read. Next chapter should be up on Monday.
Looking forward to it. Happy writing until then!
Oh, that's right, You like I, like a wee dram of whisky. Yes, I remember. I liked it when you said, "You had me at a wee dram. "Latha math agaibh air thoiseach - Slàinte"
Where are you located John. I am in Queensland, Australia - The Land Down Under.
I’m originally from Scotland but now live in Atlanta
Great Read, John.
Thank you
You’re welcome, mate. I know of that pain all too well.
There's something brutally honest about a protagonist whose hardest battle is just getting out of bed. The mundane cruelty of chronic pain is hard to write without melodrama, and you've kept it grounded here. Congrats!
I have a couple.
Please don't take this the wrong way, but the team I have are people who I have known for quite some time and who I can trust with my documents. Please do keep interacting, as things might change as I get to know you better.
As long as you are not trying to sell something, DM away.
I do
I’m not looking for anyone else at this time, but I will keep you in mind if things change.