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Roxi's Horror House's avatar

I feel like Judy's getting mighty close to ending up on a Snapped episode.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

You are going to love Chapter 6.

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Novelxr 0.R's avatar

I like how this chapter leans into a very human kind of horror. The injury is awful, but Lester’s behavior afterward is far more disturbing because it feels so real. The tension doesn’t let up even after the game ends.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Cheers for that. Things are going to start going downhill very quickly in the next couple of chapters.

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Novelxr 0.R's avatar

Wow... sounds interesting.... just thought 'd mention this, if some times comes and you appreciate detailed feedback. I'd be happy to share my thought in a note

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Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I got the sense Lester has passed already, but damn I need to see him get his comeuppance.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

You may well enjoy Chapter 6, just saying.

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Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

👀👀👀

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