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Bon C's avatar

Just keeps getting better!

Time Is A Ghost's avatar

The way you contrasted the visceral gore of the Wenlutah's attack with the silent, slow-motion grace of Salem’s awakening was breathtaking. That image of her moving through the 'lazily drifting' blood spray is hauntingly beautiful. It really feels like she’s finally shed her past to become something entirely new.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Thank you. Next chapter is coming today.

Alicia's avatar

Mr Watson, I looked up Wenlutah on Google and the result was you! You're famous. 🌟

DW Davis's avatar

It's too bad Salem had an attack of compassion toward those guys on the chopper. If she'd saved herself and let them burn, Drake and Thorne would have been truly screwed.