This played out so clearly in my mind like a film. So well-written! I'm enjoying this series so much, John! Raven might be creepy, but Silas just makes me physically uncomfortable!
Very exciting chapter. Almost missed the foreshadowing about Given's death at Raven's hands.
Someone didn't read the manual on how to build a deep-in-the-earth secret prison for bizarre creatures. Smart billionaires always have a neutron purge ready to go if one of the xeno-forms escapes.
This played out so clearly in my mind like a film. So well-written! I'm enjoying this series so much, John! Raven might be creepy, but Silas just makes me physically uncomfortable!
So glad you are enjoying it.
Wow! That was nuts! Good stuff!
Cheers
Oooh. I am binging on this to get caught up, and it is so good.
Thank you
You are outdoing yourself with this! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Glad you are enjoying it. This was written when I was in a real publishing groove.
Intense and cinematic.
This feels like a horror-thriller that could easily leap from page to screen fantastic pacing and vivid imagery, absolutely gripping !!
Thank you
Very exciting chapter. Almost missed the foreshadowing about Given's death at Raven's hands.
Someone didn't read the manual on how to build a deep-in-the-earth secret prison for bizarre creatures. Smart billionaires always have a neutron purge ready to go if one of the xeno-forms escapes.
Straight out of a Bond movie.
Was it?
I was thinking of a side mission on Noveria in the game Mass Effect 2