This is really cool, John! 😁 I truly love it! The workers accent of the protagonists is brilliant! So creepy, when he looks at the coin and no one sees the hand twiching! 😱😳💀
This is a solid start to the serial. The Victorian horror elements are vivid and the ending at the pub provides a strong hook for the next installment. Can't wait to read more!
I only hopped on here for a couple of minutes and I'm going to be in suspense until I have more time. This is so cool, John! I can literally feel the energy flowing from your writing here. I can see how these Penny Dreadfuls have taken you in, and I'm excited to come along for this journey!
This is really cool, John! 😁 I truly love it! The workers accent of the protagonists is brilliant! So creepy, when he looks at the coin and no one sees the hand twiching! 😱😳💀
Thank you
This is a solid start to the serial. The Victorian horror elements are vivid and the ending at the pub provides a strong hook for the next installment. Can't wait to read more!
Thank you.
Really cool;
Cheers
Really cool! Is what I meant
The atmosphere in this story is so vivid. I can almost feel the fog and hear the rain. Great job setting the scene! Incredibly intense!
I only hopped on here for a couple of minutes and I'm going to be in suspense until I have more time. This is so cool, John! I can literally feel the energy flowing from your writing here. I can see how these Penny Dreadfuls have taken you in, and I'm excited to come along for this journey!
Thank you. Oh, th anticipation…LOL
This is great! I love the effect this coin is having its almost like a curse virus. Anyone that sees it... 👀
Awesome start! Going to have to dig in to the rest tonight 🪙
Thank you. Hope you enjoy the full story.
Very atmospheric, like watching a movie - a very bloody, manic movie. Can't wait to see what happens next!🪙
Part 2 is up now. Final part coming tonight.
John - The weight in this piece sits just beneath the surface.
Labor. Weather. Hunger.
Then the interruption.
The coin shifts everything, not by force, but by revealing what was already present.
I am hooked! Really enjoyed this and can’t wait to see where you take it.
Part 2 is dipping into alternate universe Hellraiser territory. Glad you enjoyed it, as I was legit nervous about this one.
Ooo, that sounds awesome. And, I get that. I’m always nervous when I post to be honest. But you have a great style. Looking forward to reading more!
I’m hoping to share many more. I have a million ideas. Thank you!!