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Monica A Leyva's avatar

John, I enjoyed how this piece reframes familiar narratives by shifting the perspective. What begins as stories we think we know gradually becomes something stranger and more unsettling. There is a recurring theme of humanity confronting forces beyond its understanding and responding in ways that ultimately seal its fate.

The brevity works in its favor. You give the reader just enough detail to spark the imagination while allowing the implications to linger long after the final line. Well done. Monica

Richard Loader's avatar

My cosmic adled brain will have a go at one of these, though im on holiday so i cant yet say when i will 😄

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