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KelleyTauffel Fiction Shroom's avatar

I love that last one. All up to the imagination and so out of nowhere. I was waiting with dread and you delivered. Haha!

Bon C's avatar

Yes! Love the last one the best. So unsettling.

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I will never ever look at bath bombs or bath bomb colored/bubble filled water again. I can't even be mad at you because that was so deviously genius.

S.E.L DAWSON's avatar

These were great!

May I ask you a question? I've been seeing the term drabble ever since joining up on here and I'm not completely sure what it means! If you don't mind, could you explain it to me?

It seems to be some sort of micro fiction but I don't understand the constraints or limitations of it.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

It’s generally micro fiction that is exactly 100 words in length.

S.E.L DAWSON's avatar

Thank you for clearing that up for me.

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I loved each of those. Think the last one was my favourite.

Alicia's avatar

"Bath Time"... 😱!!

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

The river piece was something I had written, in different form, a while back. While I was writing the drabble, hard rain popped into my head, at which point I decided these three would connect, even if only in my head.