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Wallpaper Thin: Mutation X-19's avatar

These are fire!! 🔥

Wallpaper Thin: Mutation X-19's avatar

No problem, thank you for sharing!

Vanessa K. Eccles's avatar

These are great! Thank you for sharing.

J. G. Hammil's avatar

Hey! These were super fun!

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

It's harder to come up with a short piece that wraps up than a longer piece that drags on.You did an excellent job

Matt Kilby's avatar

Excellent work! I'm always a little jealous of writers who can use such short space effectively.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Thank you. I love the challenge of drabbles.

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

I too find train whistles at night to be chilling. Loved the description here!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

We have a line close to our house and those late night whistles always give me a wee chill. They feel lonely somehow.

Nick Moore's avatar

"he motions like an angler hauling in a catch" is a great image

George R. Galuschak's avatar

They're all good, but the first is my favorite!

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Excellent. I think I'd find it hard to write a clearly defined story in so few words, but you nailed it on all of them there.

Superb stuff, each bringing a different type of chill.

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John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

We live near tracks and hearing that whistle at 3 AM legit freaks me out.