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Emma-Louise Smith's avatar

Loved this one:)

Frank Floyd's avatar

This was miiiiiiiint. I love the ending! I mean, guy was just hungry. It’s not his fault.

Prof. Andy's avatar

Love it :-)

A Writer’s Voice's avatar

This is creepy as hell John! Awesome story!

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

This is why I never go out after dark.

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

Nothing scarier than a beautiful sunny day.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Especially with my pasty Scottish skin

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

Maybe you could bring an umbrella.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I need a full beekeeper suit.

Leo thee Lemon's avatar

I just had a random thought of swing dancing in a bomb blast suit. When you said beekeeper my brain had to make it weird.

Sarah Faxon's avatar

Another great spooky tale!

Livvyinthelife's avatar

Okay, John I see you!!! <3

Bon C's avatar

Excellent!

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

never answer a knock at midnight

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I never answer at any time of day…LOL

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

Oh noooooo! Bill was so close but then the glamour kicked in!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

He’ll soon become very familiar with it.

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

OMG! 😳 The animation is really creepy and your story… wow, crazy! 😱😈

Nicholas Samuel Stember's avatar

He should have listened to his own fears :D

James Patrick Riser's avatar

He was very polite.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I have a feeling that will change once the door opens.

Alicia's avatar

Noooo!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I’m afraid it’s a yes.

Alicia's avatar

😂😂! Indeed.

Andrea (Andy) Curran 🌄's avatar

Creepy! Loved it made scarier by its brevity!