Can you feel the love tonight?
Talk about subverting expectations
This one gave me a giggle. Nicely done at the end, there.
I like your sense of humor.
😂😂 I knew at the scar she was dead 🤮
SHHHHHHH!!
Good job: I was a lil concerned about that but didn’t think THAT!
I love the idea of flash fiction Friday. May have to borrow. Will certainly throw credit your way!
Flash is great. The more the merrier.
Cat in the hat anyone? 😂 well done sir.
Cheers
I KNEW it!
I tried so hard not to make it too obvious from the start.
Oh I don’t think it’s that it’s obvious! I think I just went in with a twisted, preconceived notion 😂
I'm a fan of your work since day 1
Thank you. Made my day already.
Love the ending
Thank you
Eww...
This is the only acceptable response.
Haha. Very well written
Awesomely gruesome ending!
Nice twist at the end!
Ha! This made me smile. Fun one!
Sweet
long whistle ……!
LOL!!! This is freaking awesome.
Not where I was expecting the phone call to go, but it all made sense as soon as he answered. The clues were there but you kept up the fantasy (🤮🤮🤮) brilliantly Well done!!!!!
Nice execution
Talk about subverting expectations
This one gave me a giggle. Nicely done at the end, there.
I like your sense of humor.
😂😂 I knew at the scar she was dead 🤮
SHHHHHHH!!
Good job: I was a lil concerned about that but didn’t think THAT!
I love the idea of flash fiction Friday. May have to borrow. Will certainly throw credit your way!
Flash is great. The more the merrier.
Cat in the hat anyone? 😂 well done sir.
Cheers
I KNEW it!
I tried so hard not to make it too obvious from the start.
Oh I don’t think it’s that it’s obvious! I think I just went in with a twisted, preconceived notion 😂
I'm a fan of your work since day 1
Thank you. Made my day already.
Love the ending
Thank you
Eww...
This is the only acceptable response.
Haha. Very well written
Awesomely gruesome ending!
Cheers
Nice twist at the end!
Thank you
Ha! This made me smile. Fun one!
Sweet
long whistle ……!
LOL!!! This is freaking awesome.
Thank you
Not where I was expecting the phone call to go, but it all made sense as soon as he answered. The clues were there but you kept up the fantasy (🤮🤮🤮) brilliantly Well done!!!!!
Thank you
Nice execution
Thank you