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Horror Hangouts's avatar

Talk about subverting expectations

A.L. Treadwell's avatar

This one gave me a giggle. Nicely done at the end, there.

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I like your sense of humor.

Sam’s Spaghetti's avatar

😂😂 I knew at the scar she was dead 🤮

Ginny Lynns (Remembring2Laugh)'s avatar

Good job: I was a lil concerned about that but didn’t think THAT!

Brienne Daugherty's avatar

I love the idea of flash fiction Friday. May have to borrow. Will certainly throw credit your way!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Flash is great. The more the merrier.

Poor Joe's avatar

Cat in the hat anyone? 😂 well done sir.

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

I KNEW it!

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

I tried so hard not to make it too obvious from the start.

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

Oh I don’t think it’s that it’s obvious! I think I just went in with a twisted, preconceived notion 😂

garnett's avatar

I'm a fan of your work since day 1

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

Thank you. Made my day already.

Rebecca Watson (ReBe)'s avatar

Love the ending

Luke John's avatar

Eww...

John Watson - Horror Author's avatar

This is the only acceptable response.

Luke John's avatar

Haha. Very well written

Charlie Walls's avatar

Awesomely gruesome ending!

RJ Sykes's avatar

Nice twist at the end!

Katrina C's avatar

Ha! This made me smile. Fun one!

Zeitforge's avatar

long whistle ……!

Alicia's avatar

LOL!!! This is freaking awesome.

Kimberly B🌴👻🌴's avatar

Not where I was expecting the phone call to go, but it all made sense as soon as he answered. The clues were there but you kept up the fantasy (🤮🤮🤮) brilliantly Well done!!!!!

Gerald Siravo's avatar

Nice execution