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Crosswind Chronicles's avatar

Honestly, I love that you mentioned this came from just forcing yourself to write and seeing what surfaced, because it gives the whole piece this raw dreamlike momentum that really works.

“The building is in decay, falling apart from the inside out, like a rotting tooth” is such a nasty good image. And the ending flipping the perspective into something darker than the sisters themselves was a really cool turn.

Alexander Marlow's avatar

Thanks. I feel stronger too

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